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CM . . . . Volume XXI Number 28 . . . . March 27, 2015
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Phoebe anxiously waits for nightfall to use the telescopes from her dad's store to view Mars and Saturn. The only problem might be city light pollution that will bleach out the stars. She makes a wish for the city lights to be extinguished "just for a while". At first, it seems that a thunderstorm will wash out the plans anyway... until the power goes out. Enraptured, Phoebe marvels at constellations, Saturn's rings (knowing she's named for one of its moons), and glimpses of the Milky Way. What a treat in the starry city sky!
The language is most appealing with its strong active writing style (great verb choices such as flashed, flickered, glimmer, whistled, blurred, blotted) to show the images. There's a clever hint of trouble ahead as Phoebe notices people hurrying past "hugging themselves against the wind." How easy it is to see Phoebe's "sidewalk solar system dissolving into chalky streams" in the downpour, and to hear the rain letting up as it changes to "pitter-patter-drip". Her young voice rings true as she moves through anticipation, apprehension, longing, disappointment and determination all the way to delight and wonder. Illustrations have just the right feel for the nature of this story, complementing the tone in soft colours using a variety of media—watercolour, acrylic, pencil, pastel—and showing lots of energy and motion. Early in the story, Dad's store roof is shown as a deck with huge potted plants, a subtle environmentally friendly detail. Sensibly, as I hoped they would, Phoebe and Dad end up there on the last page. Although classified as fiction (813.54), it might be best placed on the science shelves. As a picture book offered mainly to youngest readers, there's a risk others may miss this charming story, as well as the value of those final pages. Highly Recommended. Gillian Richardson is a freelance writer living in BC.
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