Hypnotic Dunces
Hypnotic Dunces
Josh leaned his forehead against the cool windowpane. The good old raisins and peanuts churned in his stomach. There was something about riding a school bus that always made Josh feel sick. The stale air. The swaying motion. The smell of gasoline.
From the seat behind him, he heard the ‘pop’ of a thermos and the gurgle of liquid pouring into a cup. It smelled like hot chocolate. In the other seats, the kids gnawed on granola bars or breakfast sandwiches. No one offered to share. If this were early-morning hockey practice, one of the parents would have brought a bag of slices or a box of doughnuts for the team. But it was every kid for himself in Junior Survivors Club. Josh closed his eyes and dozed off, dreaming of bacon and fried fish.
Dunces Anonymous is back. The members of the club that engages in implausible shenanigans to outsmart their parents have another challenge on their hands. How can they wrestle control of the high school play from scheming Stacey and her overbearing mother so they can win spots in the National Theatre School’s Summer Theatre Academy? Needless to say, Stacey and her mother are stereotypical characters with no redeeming features. The rest of the characters are equally two-dimensional.
While a lighthearted read is fine, this series struggles to find its footing. It’s not clear who the intended audience is. The characters are all in high school, but the humour and reading level are more appropriate for younger ages. It’s got some elements of fantasy, mostly revolving around a mail-order medallion that Dunces Anonymous member, Wang, uses to hypnotize people. It’s not enough to entice a serious fantasy reader, but it is juvenile enough to put off older readers.
The story is set in the present, but there is little or no technology, except for the odd suggestion that a photograph might appear on Snapchat or Instagram. This undermines the story and might further alienate readers as there are several instances where the problem could be solved, or at least reduced, by pulling out a smartphone and researching the answer.
Finally, the story has thoughtless plotline involving nursing homes. The portrayal of these facilities and the people in them is very negative.
It is hard to recommend Hypnotic Dunces due to its weak characters and unclear audience.
Sophia Hunter is a teacher-librarian at Crofton House Junior School in Vancouver, British Columbia.