Shock Wave
Shock Wave
Jake felt burning pain in his throat and tears running down his face. This was just from exposure to some of the spray still hanging in the air in an enclosed space after she’d squirted it into Nepto’s face. He could only imagine what it had been like for Nepto.
What Jake knew about pepper spray came from one of the combat guys who had worked with him on the Shilo base in Manitoba. The combat guy had a friend in the RCMP. As part of the training at Depot Division in Regina, RCMP recruits had to let themselves get pepper sprayed in order to learn how to fight while enduring the effects. The guy said his friend told him it was like getting hot sauce dumped onto the eyeballs and into the mouth. Instant blindness, choking sensation.
When the pray hit Nepto full in the eyes and open mouth, he’d twisted and turned away in agony, flailing those massive arms.
Smart fighters knew when to leave. So Jake had grabbed the grocery bag and the bundles of money, leaving Nepto behind to roar in anger like a crazed bull.
Jake has grown up in the military. His father died in the army, and his mother is getting intense treatment for PTSD. So, Jake is spending the summer at his uncle’s cabin on Shuswap Lake in the interior of British Columbia. One night, an attractive young woman, perhaps a bit older than he, rides a jet ski across the lake and stops at his dock. She is dressed in an alluring black bikini, long red hair flowing down her back. Jake finds it extremely difficult to say no to her and reluctantly agrees to help her with a crazy scheme. The plan is to take Jake’s uncle’s boat to a houseboat in the middle of the lake.
The girl, who gives her name as ‘Angela’, tells Jake she is playing a night-time game with friends and that she is the ‘assassin’. Her role is to sneak onto the houseboat unheard and put red lipstick on the foreheads of the people sleeping on the houseboat. This is the sign that they have been caught by the assassin. Angela want to use Jake’s uncle’s boat because its electric and so much quieter than gas-propelled motor boats. Jake isn’t sure Angela is telling the truth – or the entire truth – but he decides to play along and take her to the houseboat.
It turns out ‘Angela’ is actually Ashley, and she and a friend have been sneaking onto houseboats for months and robbing the boaters of any valuables. This time, Ashley messes with the wrong guy as she grabs a very expensive watch worth more than a new car as well as hundreds of thousands of dollars in a nondescript bag. Ashley disappears, leaving Jake to deal with the very powerful and angry man who threatens to burn down his uncle’s house and hurt Jake’s mother if the money isn’t returned soon. Suddenly, Jake has many problems. He needs to find Ashley fast and try to keep the thugs from beating him up, hurting his mother and burning down his uncle’s cabin. How will Jake solve these conundrums?
Shock Wave is part of the “Orca Soundings” series, books with reading levels between grade 2 and grade 4.5 and written specifically for teens who are reluctant readers and/or challenged readers. The stories are fast-paced and mostly plot driven with lots of exciting and often dangerous incidents throughout the story.
Shock Wave reads like a James Bond adventure, complete with sexy girls, gangsters, guns and violence. I’m sure the opening of the novel will grab most teen boys’ attention with the beautiful and scantily bikini-clad young woman standing on the dock, dripping water and asking for help. In this day and age, I question the need to have this scene. Surely a sophisticated and confident young woman who knows what she wants would be powerful, attractive and interesting, as well. This scene feels a bit like a throwback to the 1960s before the awareness of women’s rights. I hope that we have moved past the need to have scenes like this in books for young adults. For these reasons, I recommend this book with reservations.
Mary Harelkin Bishop is the author of the “Tunnels of Moose Jaw Adventure” series as well as many other books, including her Reconciliation books, Mistasinîy: Buffalo Rubbing Stone and Skye Bird and the Eagle Feather, published by DriverWorks Ink. You can find Mary on her website – maryhbishop.ca, or Facebook and view video clips on her YouTube channel. You can also find her books on the DriverWorks Ink website.